高中英语书面表达分类汇编话题写作传统节日

传统节日的写作要注意时间的表达，理解节日的目的和意义以及普遍的节日活动或礼仪，汇编整理有助于同类比较和归纳。

国庆节

假定你是李华。你刚从英国为期五天的旅游回来，感谢好友Rick的款待。得知他对中国的文化非常的感兴趣，特别是即将到来的国庆节，请你写一封信介绍中国的国庆节。内容要点：

1、感谢他的招待。

2、介绍中国的国庆节（时间，意义等） 3、欢迎他来中国。 注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 答案及解析： Dear Rick,

How is everything going? I had a five-day trip to London last week. I would like to express my gratitude for your hospitality and kindness when I was in London.

Knowing that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especially National Day, I would love to introduce it to you. National Day, one of the most significant festivals in China, falls on October1st every year. People celebrate this festival in celebration of the foundation of People’s Republic of China, the so-called New China dating back to 1949. People in China will hold a variety of activities to honor that day, such as holding grand military parade, having a travel.

Welcome to China.You will have an unforgettable experience if you come to China before this festival. Best wishes.

Yours sincerely, Li Hua

书面表达的解题思路：

李华刚从英国为期五天的旅游回来，写信感谢好友Rick的款待。得知Rick对中国的文化非常感兴趣，特别是即将到来的国庆节，在信中介绍中国的国庆节。文章主要分三部分来写：首先感谢Rick对自己的招待；然后主要介绍中国的国庆节，具体包括时间，意义和人们的活动等。最后欢迎Rick来中国。

写作时要注意条理清楚，要点全面，尽可能详细地介绍国庆节。还要注意句式的变化，如宾语从句that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, one of句型，词语express my gratitude,

hospitality and kindness, take a great fancy, in celebration of, dating back to等。

中秋节

一个英文网站面向中学生征稿，请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

1.写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一； 2.家人团聚； 3.赏月、吃月饼；

4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。 注息：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以断使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. 答案及解析：

The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in

the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends. 本文是一篇提纲作文。写作时首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。我们在写作中应当用尽可能少的形式表达尽可能多的语义内容，力求简洁精练。根据提示内容，写出所列要点，要全面。我们在用词上应该仔细揣摩，准确清晰地表达我们的思想，剔除冗词赘语，使文章言简意赅。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如：no matter how far away or how busy we are, As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. 等。还运用了主语从句What we love most，和定语从句the time we enjoy the full moon together. 等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Usually,With the beautiful moon up in the sky, In addition to等。

中秋节

假设你是李华，校学生会，想邀请外教Henry先生一起参加学校举办的中秋节晚会。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍写邮件的目的；

2.晚会时间、地点：9月30日晚6点、学校报告厅； 3.晚会内容：同学们表演节目、吃月饼、赏月。 注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 答案及解析： Dear Mr.Henry,

I’m Li Hua,Chairman of Students’ Union.It’s a great honour for me,on behalf of my fellow union members,to invite you to attend our party.The Mid-Autumn Festival is around the corner,which is a time for family members and loved ones to get

together.

To celebrate this Chinese traditional festival,a party will be held at the lecture hall of our school at 6 pm.on Sep.30th.At the party there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods,including mooncakes,watermelons,grapes and so on,while admiring the fullest and roundest moon.

We can’ t wait to see you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

书面表达的解题思路：

1.确定文章的体裁，本题所要求写的书面表达是书信，那么首先就需要知晓书信的写作特点。

2.确定文章时态的基调，确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。根据这篇题干要求可知应该以一般将来时为主。

3. 给文章划分基本段落，仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有：①.写信的目的；②. 晚会时间、地点以及晚会内容。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段。 4.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。

5.连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。 At the party there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods, including mooncakes, watermelons, grapes and so on, while admiring the fullest and roundest moon.

句意：在晚会上，会有很多表演，我们会享受各种美味的食物，包括月饼、西瓜、葡萄等，同时欣赏最圆、最圆的月亮。

主句是由and连接的两个分句“At the party there will be a lot of performances”和“we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods”。句中“including mooncakes, watermelons, grapes and so on,”做插入语，“while admiring the fullest and roundest moon”在句中做状语。

春节

假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Dave想了解中国的传统节日\"春节\"，请你回复他的电子邮件，介绍\"春节\"及这个节日里的主要活动．

1．它是中国的传统节日之一； 2．家人团聚；

3．吃饺子、放焰火、走亲访友等其他活动． 注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总数． 参考词汇：

春节the Spring Festival 放焰火set off fireworks Dear Dave，

In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

答案及解析： Dear Dave，

In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．As is known to all，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country．（点明书信的主要内容） Usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we will try to come home for the celebration．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast．【高分句型一】Children have great fun in setting off fireworks．Parents take their kids to pay a visit to relatives or friends．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．【高分句型二】（春节的活动）

Hopefully，you will come to China to experience it．Looking forward to your early reply．（提出希望）

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

这是一篇介绍春节的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容主要包括：一点明书信的主要内容；二春节的活动；三提出希望． 高分句型：

1．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast 句子里making dumplings and having a feast 做句子的伴随状语．make，have和主语all the family members 之间是主动关系． 在除夕夜，所有的家庭成员聚集在一起，包饺子，吃大餐．

2．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．句子里In addition to 表示\"除此之外\"；have a new tendency to 表示\"有一个新的流行趋势\"．

除了传统的活动，人们有了一个新的流行趋势，例如旅行，用微信发送祝愿．

端午节

假如你是李华，你校外教Rita对中国传统文化感兴趣。端午节即将来临，你打算邀请她来家里过端午节。请写一份电子邮件给Rita，要点如下；

1．说明写信目的；

2．介绍端午节（时间、纪念屈原）； 3．你计划的庆祝活动。 Dear Rita,

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

答案及解析： Dear Rita,

Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family.

The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival, falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May. It is set in honor of a distinguished Chinese poet QuYuan, who has a reputation for his patriotism and contributions to classical poetry. To help you experience the traditional festival, I sincerely hope you can come to my home and join us in our celebration. We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV, all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture.

I have the confidence that you will have a good time here. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 由于文章是一篇电子邮件，注意文章要以简易书信的形式进行叙述。 【范文亮点】

1.文章采用了“ I’d like to 我想要……”“in honor of 为了纪念”“has a reputation for 在……有声誉”“ Looking forward to 期待”等高分句式。

2.文章采用了“ have a good time玩得开心，join in 参与”等高频词组。

3.开篇使用现在分词作状语。\"Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family.\" 4. \"The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival, falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May.\" falling现在分词作状语。

5.which引导非性定语从句，\"We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi

and watch dragon boat race on TV, all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture.\"