作文2-Changesinme

composition-changes in me【题⽬】

写⼀篇以前你是什么样⼦的，现在的你是什么样⼦的短⽂。可以⽤以下提⽰词，不少于5句话。

(quiet, active, short, tall, thin, strong, go cycling, ice-skate,...)⼀、审题：

以前——⼀般过去时（过去式）现在——⼀般现在时（原形）

以前：before, 3 years ago, then, at that time现在：now

⼆、选择标题。Changes in meThen and NowBefore and Now列表

过去和现在对⽐，⼀⼀对应。

可以从外貌、性格、能⼒、爱好等⽅⾯作对⽐。列3点最佳。三、写作1、分3段。总——分——总。

如果通篇只有⼀段，看得阅卷⽼师眼睛累，增加阅卷负担，会影响作⽂分数哦～每段前⾯空2个字母。2、注重开头。

开头⽤适当的、⾼级的句⼦放在开头，起到⼀鸣惊⼈的效果。给阅卷⽼师⼀个震撼：嗯，这个⼈英语很不错嘛～3、注重结尾。

开头和结尾，是阅卷⽼师⾮常注重的部分。

有个漂亮的开头，再加上⼀个漂亮的结尾，再次给予阅卷⽼师⼀个震撼：这孩⼦，英语果然很不错呢！给⾼分！⼀定给⾼分！4、注意字迹⼯整、卷⾯整洁。

（1）字不能太⼩，不然增加阅卷⽼师的阅卷难度。你给他们找⿇烦，他们也会给你找⿇烦哦——扣分！字也不能太⼤。不然就不美观，整体看起来会很凌乱。（2）字迹⼀定要⼯整，不能涂涂改改、影响整体效果。

改作⽂的阅卷⽼师改⼀篇英语作⽂不会⼗秒。看标题、开头、结尾，中间扫⼀眼，打分。如果没发现错误，加上你的字迹⼯整、卷⾯整洁，恭喜你，你⾄少能拿8分哦～（3）单词中间不能涂改。

单词也不能转⾏。

（4）如果你涂涂改改——oh no，这个⼈写作⽂吞吞吐吐，⾃⼰都没想好⾃⼰说什么，英语肯定不会很好。扣分！扣分！关于字迹⼯整。

有句话叫做：“字如其⼈。”阅卷⽼师⼤都是这样想的。

你连英语字母都写不好，成绩肯定不会好到哪⾥去。扣分扣分！

如果你字迹⼯整、卷⾯整洁，就算发现了⼀些错误，阅卷⽼师也可能会⼼情好得放过你：⼀定是考试太紧张了，没关系没关系，字这么好看，少扣点分！

如果真实⽔平是6分的作⽂，字不好看，可能只得到3分；如果字好看，说不定能得8分呢！如果真是⽔平是8分的作⽂，字好看，10分送给你送给你；如果字不好看，哎呀，给个6分就算了。三、易错句型。1. Now, I very strong.2. Well, I was short.3. Now, I very like winter.4. Now, I like ice-skate.5. I'm taller then before.

6. Now, I am tall and strong than before.7. Before, I was quiet. Now, I active in the class.8. Now, I am every active in class.

9. Before, I was quiet. Now, I am active in the class. I'm taller than before. I always talk with joy.10. Before, i didn't like winter. Because, it was too cold.11. Hello, I'm Amy. I 13 years old.12. 因果倒置

Before, I didn't like winter. So, I couldn't go cycling. Now, I love winter, so I can go ice-skating.13. didn't 和couldn't ⽤法混乱

⼆者都表⽰否定。couldn't 表⽰不能，没有能⼒。didn't表⽰不，有能⼒但是不愿意做。Before, I was short. I didn't go cycling.Before, I couldn't like winter.14. 逻辑混乱。

Before, I could play badminton. Now, I can't play badminton. Before, I was active. Now, I'm quiet. I always talk with joy. 15. be动词乱⽤。

Hello, I'm Amy. I 13 years old.Before, I short. Now, I tall.

Before, I was short. Now, I was tall.

Before, I'm couldn't go cycling.Now, I'm can ride a bike. be动词⽤法：(1)是

(2)be＋形容词(…的)

(3)be＋动ing

(4)be going to+动原(表将来)不能加be动词的情况。

(1)动词原形。l'm like to go ice-skating.(2)动词过去式。I'm rode a horse last weekend.四、开头

1. Hi, everyone. I'm Amy. I'm 12 years old.I'm different now.

2.Changes are around me.3.Changes are with me.

4. Everything is changing. Me too!五、中间。（⼀）外貌对⽐

1.（⾝⾼）Before, I was short. Now, I'm taller than before.2.（体重）Before, I was thin. Now, I'm stronger than before.

3.（⾝⾼＋体重）Before, I was short and thin. Now, I'm taller and stronger than before.4.（头发）Before, I had short hair. Now, I have long hair.5.（眼镜）Before, I didn't wear glasses. but now, I wear glasses.⼆、性格对⽐

quiet-active, shy-funny, strict-friendly/funny,

（not）hard-working at school, (not) helpful at home/school

(1) Before, I was quiet. Now, I'm very active in class. Ialways talk with joy.(2) Once I wasn'tan active girl. I didn't talk a lot.Now, I talk more than before. I always talk with joy.过去、现在写⼀句也可以。写你不会写错的。三、能⼒对⽐(couldn't/ can+动原)

1. Before, I couldn't go cycling. Now, I can ride a bike.I ride a bike every day.(I like it very much.)(I'm good at riding a bike.)go cycling= ride a bikeice-skate = go ice-skating

(球类)play badminton (乐器类)play the pianodo sports= play sports

clean my room= do the cleaning

wash my clothescook do kung fumake a snowmanswim =go swimming四、爱好对⽐didn't like/ like+动ing+to +动原

liked/ don't like+动ing+to +动原

1. Before, I didn't like winter. I thought it was too cold, and I couldn't go cycling.Now I like to ice-skate, so I like winter.(spring, summer, autumn, winter)2. (music, sports, English, maths)

Before, I didn't like music. Because it was too hard(困难). Now, I can play the piano. So I like music very much.五、tips